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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Well, that was a lot of fun! What happens next?

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Shawn Emhe II's avatar

Thank you, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

That's a good question! I actually had more in mind for the story when I wrote it, but I was up against a competition deadline. I've been thinking about going back and giving it room to grow.

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

I think you should - it’s a great set up and has very likeable characters.

Know what you mean about competition deadlines though.

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J.M. Ransom's avatar

This was a really fun read! The pace was quick, the worldbuilding was efficient, relevant to modern times but not too tropey. Thanks for sharing!

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Shawn Emhe II's avatar

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Glad you liked it!

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